Post #3
February 4, 2008
crandella802
She has a such a presence that when she walks into a room, you know she’s there. But, unlike some people who are “head jerkers” because they are good looking, this is completely untrue for her. She has sharp features that make her look stern and unfriendly. A sharp, small, pointed nose, that smells her prey. A small, tight lipped mouth, that never opens to smile. However, anyone, can hear her snide rude, unkind, sarcastic comments that come flying out of her mouth at any given moment . She uses her eyes to shoot daggers towards her victim to let them know there next. Her hair is short and thin,which reveals her unflattering facial features. Her body motions lack the openness and love that most thirty year old soon to be moms project. Instead, she is cold and introverted with her movements. At all times her arms are crossed and shoulders are hunched over nearly touching one another. This woman projects her unhappiness with each move and instinctive decision she makes. She is like an animal rather than a human who acts on every sudden impulse she has.
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cutticap | February 5, 2008 at 3:12 am
WOW! I love the connection between animal and human. I like that you described her using “animal” terms and not “human” terms. I’m scared of her and that’s because of the great detail and description you gave! Great job!!
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carawhalen | February 5, 2008 at 11:58 pm
I thought that the way you described the person with harsh detial, truly made it all come together. The way that you were able to build up this dislike and unhappy person and then conclude with indicating that she is an ‘animal’ was perfect. Good job!
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ksmebaby55 | February 6, 2008 at 2:06 am
great description i can picture the person in my head.. i also liked how you compared humans to animals..
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sjordan740 | February 6, 2008 at 8:26 pm
I thought you did a magnificent job with this! When I started reading I could have sworn you were talking about an animal, then towards the end i realized that you were talking about a person! I loved the way you described this person, because i could imagine her in my mind! Its almost a little scary! Great Job!